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In this post I revise the end of my essay
I feel like this conclusion answers the question of so what better than the first . It also goes into detail of the of what the author's strategies will ultimately do for the intended audience. I also feel like it relate back to the target rhetorical audience as well, because they will ultimately understand that I know their struggles and where they are coming from.
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The author of this text informs and gently persuades her readers to agree with her viewpoint of America's delusions about the strength of the sanctions placed on the North Korean country by drawing on the audience's emotions . Through these strategies Fifield opens the eyes of her American readers , and confirms to her audience that the government may not always know what they're doing or acknowledge the consequences of their actions. I don't want to say this is a perfect conclusion but this should meet the requirements. It doesn't have to be covered in unicorn glitter and angel sparkles to catch the eyes of a superficial reader (although it can) , It just has to ,simply, make sense and give the reader the perception that you as a writer know what you're talking about even if you honestly don't.
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