Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

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In this post I basically explain my decisions in my draft essay.

To be completely honest I do not know if what I wrote makes sense at all, but that's how i feel generally about most situations. I also decided to take out trying to explain the credibility aspect of the essay becasue I felt  that the emotional appeal was a lot stronger argument.

I'm pretty sure it doesn't flow well either so ....yeah .  Any feedback is good feedback.... unless it's rude.

Here it is .