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In this post I wearily analyze my strengths and weakness of my essay (Even though I'd rather be at McDonalds ordering chicken mcnugggests or some other form of McHappiness )
In my paragraph analysis I noticed that I explained myself pretty well in my paragraphs including why I chose a certain example and what it offers to the strategies used. I could be more explicit about the affects of these certain examples to the audience and why they would persuade someone. I also noticed that whenever I mixed the analysis of my text with addressing my audience it didn't flow well together so I'll have to fix that too. My strengths would be using a lot of words to mask what I lack , and also providing useful explanations, My weakness would be transitioning and not going into minute detail.
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