Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Reflection on Open Letter Draft


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In this post I reflect on my open letter.

I peer reviewed Olivia and Hunter's open draft letters




  • Did I demonstrate an ability to think about my writing and myself as a writer?
I think I displayed how I think of myself sufficiently enough. In the beginning of my letter I  compared myself to how I thought about my own writing skills before I took this class and went through the letter by talking about how my opinion changed throughout  the course and then I ended with what I think of my writing skills and going froward to how they will have to change for the oncoming college years
  • Did I provide analysis of my experiences , assignments, or concepts I have learned?
I described my experiences previous to college and I named a few recent assignments that altered my viewpoint but I didn't go into detail of those assignments that changed my opinion of my writing skills.
  • Did I provide concrete examples from my own writing?
Other than inserting one quote and vaguely talking about a particular assignment I didn't really explain them. 


  • Did I explain why I  made certain choices and if those choices were effective?
I explained why I thought the way I did about my own writing previously and cited it towards my earlier high school classes but I don't think I went into enough detail about the current choices I made in writing and why.
  • What I plan on revising overall?   
Overall I plan on using more quotes from my previous assignments to better enhance the points I make in my letter , I also plan to go in depth into what particular assignments changed my opinion about my writing skills as well as use previous projects to highlight mistakes I made or changes that helped me out. 



























Friday, December 4, 2015

Draft of Open Letter

via Flickr by Rennete Stowe " Sleeping Lion" https://www.flickr.com/photos/tomsaint/3267923031 
In this post  I post a link to my draft letter

I wonder if the tone I took with the letter is a bit casual and I also wonder if it's a bit long as well.
like before any feedback is good feedback .

My Draft Letter

Reflecting more on my Writing Experiences

via Flickr by Tyler " Magic Mirror on the Wall Orange" https://www.flickr.com/photos/superstrikertwo/3270902525



In this post I answer questions about my writing process over the semester.



  • The biggest challenges I faced overall? Overall.....the biggest challenges were revising, because initially I didn't like to revise , and when I did I never did a true in depth revision. So the revising process was a challenge for me, maybe not some much as the content part, but the grammar mistakes and sentence technicalities, were and still are a challenge. In the blog post " identifying basic grammar patterns , I basically sum up my writing in a few words, "I don't analyze anything I write , I just write whatever comes out of my head first ."  
  • (Identifying basic Grammar Patterns)
  • What I  learned about my time management , writing , and editorial skills? Well as stated above my editorial skills are a bit lacking but as far as my writing skills go, I've always been pretty confident about them, but I have like added more...... awareness about my writing skills  I guess. I know how to consider my audience and genre now and incorporate rhetorical strategies into whatever context i'm writing about.
  • What do you know more about the concept of genre? I've think I've learned everything there is to know about researching my genre. and considering my genre when getting ready to write my draft. In the Audience and Genre blog I thought it was extremely helpful to pick the type of audience you want and then direct the content of your writing towards them , which , again I found really helpful when writing. (Audience and Genre
  • What skills might you develop further? My grammar skills are in desperate need of development, but other than that I think considering my genre is also something I would develop further, because picking the right genre for your writing can determine how the rest of it will go.
  • Most effective moment? The most effective moment of the semester was probably analyzing rhetorical strategies in the sources we picked, because once I could recognize the strategies other authors used I could use them in my own writing, also being able to recognize and then utilize the different appeals in works of writing is going to be extremely helpful for the future. So even though it was long the analyzing rhetorical strategies was helpful and made me an effective writer for the rest of the assignments. (Analyzing Rhetorical Strategies in .....)
  • Least effective moment? For me the least effective moment out of the whole semester were writing the lovely Clarity blogs, because even though I somewhat lack the revision skills in editing my grammar it still didn't help with my editing and that particular thing is still something I need to develop further in my writing. Which isn't really grammar based but just basic revision skills that I always overlook.

Wednesday, December 2, 2015

Revisiting My Writing Process

via Flickr by Will " fox writing with a quill pen" https://www.flickr.com/photos/ajourneyroundmyskull/4480056969 

In this post I ponder about my writing skills.


In all honesty I don't think I've changed that much in my writing process. It takes me a while to plan out how I want everything to go, and then it takes me little to no time to execute it the "first" time . Once I started revising more ( because I didn't really do it all before) I started to edit, revise, and re-evaluate,my writing . The best thing I did while revising my draft was probably rewriting my thesis and conclusion because it forced me to look over everything I wrote and make sure it followed what was summarized in the thesis.

 I have also realized that I'm not really a procrastinator.I like to be on top of things so I've always thought that if my assignments weren't done two days after I got them then I was procrastinating. but listening to other people and their procrastination stories made me realize that I set the standards for myself  too high.  The "latest" I've ever been was typing up the last two blogs on a Friday night or finishing the last blog Saturday morning.

I do revise more now that I know the exact steps to go through when revising but as for my writing  process and time management, it will remain pretty much the same, I'll still plan things in detail and then scribble it all out into a semi coherent idea. but my revision process , which was in need of dire assistance, will be a lot better and produce greater results.













Sunday, November 22, 2015

Reflection on Project 3

Via Flickr by Leland Francisco "Positive Thinker"  https://www.flickr.com/photos/lel4nd/5455224577

In this post I reflect on project three and answer some questions.

  • What was revised?  In my final draft of my project I cut down on the summary of the situation and attempted to relate it to myself as a college student in the economics major. For example I clearly stated my potion, "As an American College student"  Also I changed the image of my project to better suit the content.
  • How did I reconsider my thesis or organization?  I reconsidered my organization of my project by cutting down on the summary and attempting to jump more into the point of my argument. For example I state my opinion in the thesis of the first paragraph. and then proceed to go through my argument with explanations and reasons.
  • What led to those changes?  I had to reconsider my genre and try to follow the format of those examples for my public argument. 
  • How do these changes affect credibility? I think by including my perspective as a college student in the economics major increased my credibility to the audience.
  •   How will these changes better address the audience or venue? My argument is directed at college students who are interested in global economics , and the changes I made in my draft will enable them to relate more to the argument and to me as the author.
  • How did I reconsider sentence structure and style? I reconsider sentence style and structure by attempting to create a  more casual , easily comprehensible but still informative dialogue throughout my argument.  for instance throughout the entirety of my argument I refer to America as a hater of China's AIIB.
  • How will these changes assist the audience in understanding the purpose? Without being bored of the content they'll be able to easily understand and agree with points while still finding the humor in the situation. 
  • Did I reconsider the genre conventions that I was writing for?  Yes, My argument looked too similar to a QRG so I had to shorten the summary part of  my argument.
  • How does this process help me reconsider my identity as a writer?  The process of  reflection helped me to reconsider how I follow the conventions of the genre I chose and that by  finding the right genre to display my opinions will help in choosing how I utilize  that platform or genre for any piece of writing.

Publishing Project 3


"Myrtle Snow AHS" by Zayla Crocker


In this post I post my final project : Why the U.S is making a Mistake in Hating on China's AIIB


Target audience currently stands on the issue (before reading/watching/hearing your argument) below:
←----------------------------------------------------|----X----------------------------------------------------->
Strongly                                            Totally neutral                                                    Strongly
agree             
                                                                                                             disagree
  Target audience should be (after they've read/watched/heard your argument) below:
←-----------------X-----------------------------------|--------------------------------------------------------->
Strongly                                            Totally neutral                                                    Strongly
agree                                                                                                                          disagree


3. Check one (and only one) of the argument types below for your public argument:
           
 ____X___ My public argument openly refutes a specific solution or policy under debate (and clearly identifies the idea I'm refuting).


4.  explain how your public argument doesn’t simply restate information from other sources, but provides original context and insight into the situation:  


 Rather than restating other sources my argument questions the sensibility of the decisions made by the U.S by providing examples and reasons as to why I feel the way I do and even going as far as explaining what would have been a better option.




5. Identify the specific rhetorical appeals you believe you've employed in your public argument below:

Ethical or credibility-establishing appeals

               
___X__ Referring to credible sources (established journalism, credentialed experts, etc.)
  __X___ Employing carefully chosen key words or phrases that demonstrate you are credible (proper terminology, strong but clear vocabulary, etc.)
___X__ Adopting a tone that is inviting and trustworthy rather than distancing or alienating
___X__ Arranging visual elements properly (not employing watermarked images, cropping images carefully, avoiding sloppy presentation)                    
_   X___ Sharing any personal expertise you may possess about the subject (your identity as a student in your discipline affords you some authority here)
 __X___ Openly acknowledging counterarguments and refuting them intelligently

                    Emotional appeals

      
 __X__ Employing the repetition of key words or phrases that create an appropriate emotional impact
 __X__ Appropriate use of humor for subject matter, platform/website, audience
 __X__ Employing an engaging and appropriate tone of voice for the debate
           

Logical or rational appeals

  X__ Using statistics from credible sources in order to establish precedents, trends, or patterns
_X__ Using expert opinions that help affirm your stance or position
 X__ Effective organization of elements, images, text, etc                  
 _
  Examples:  The Economist  Slate   Naked Capitalism

Project 3



                  Why The U.S is Making a Mistake by hating on China's AIIB

"Myrtle Snow AHS" by Zayla Crocker
After The U.S acted like the classic mean girl, by which I mean, disapproving China's AIIB idea and trying to get all the other countries to go against it as well, they have recently decided on some sort of back handed truce. Not an apology. Not an offer to join , but a deal that insures that China isn't spending all their money on the bank of their own creation but still depositing money into the highly American influenced World bank.Although the World bank will offer to help ,America ,the country that promotes international free trade and progress ,have basically turned down a prime opportunity to  personally be a part of a new era of intentional funding 

As an economics major who's interested in global economics this confuses me. Logically, you would think after all the other countries promptly ignored America's claims that they "feared" China wouldn't follow environmental or labor safeguards, that the government would  at least change their mind and attempt to apologize for their pettiness , and offer to take part in China's ambitious and globally beneficial project as David Dollar , a senior fellow of Foreign policy and Global economy at the Bookings Institution agrees.

Rather than feeling threatened of having their global power being taken away and creating some weak excuses( that none of the other five hundred countries who joined the AIIB were worried about at all , mind you)  The U.S should have kept their feelings to themselves and offered to be the first one to join the AIIB . And why?

 The benefits would have been tremendous . For instance the U.K was one of the first European countries to join the AIIB and the result? A reported 60 billion dollar deal from China covering The U.K's industries of retail, finance, energy  and aerospace will signed. Also China will be financially backing the U.K's first nuclear factory in twenty five years.  Now of course , just because someone joined doesn't mean their privy to this kind of monetary benefit , but China has been investing an awful lot money in developed nations particularly the U.S.  Business Spectator states that  reports have shown that  over the last five years an estimate of 46 billion have been spent on projects in the U.S .  So who's to say that a billion dollar deal wouldn't have come America's way if they had joined?

Naturally, it's sensible  to think that the U.S could have happily indulged in that kind of  monetary support but instead they loudly, and openly displayed their . If they had joined first they could have politely stated their concerns and had one of their own agents investigate the financial transactions of the AIIB. As an added result America wouldn't look shady or seem blatantly threatened by how well the Asian Infrastructure Investment will do.

As any American college student who wants to be involved in international economics would feel, it seem that our government made an emotionally charged decision that could leave the U.S out of major economic changes in the coming future.  As most people in the economics field knows, China is a rising star in the global markets, and the AIIB will perhaps only further that role. As an international bank it could prove to run  dare I say, better than the banks America helped create.   Unlike other institutions the AIIB will offer more loans to countries with ' fewer strings attached' , contrary to others.  For example , usually a country needs a loan to fix an energy shortage, or water shortage,  or some sort of building project for roads and hospitals . Other institutions ( *cough* The World Bank) would require the cost of materials used like bricks or asphalt  or water treatment  to be raised substantially( which would probably come out of the citizen's taxes) in order to equal the amount loaned out. The AIIB however would not do that and instead rely on other finance options . (CNBC)

Presently,despite the niceties, China could essentially care less about the U.S's assistance in these grand global plans that include creating substantial trade throughout Eurasia and Africa that could result in the development of poor countries.Although China says they welcome any participation America will offer they probably don't need (or care for )America's meddling ,which is reiterated in MarketPulse .

Essentially  America fears China's rising power in the economic sector, however if the government  really wanted to stop it , maybe they should have allied themselves with the AIIB, just like the old cliche goes, "If you can't beat them , join them"  If (or perhaps a better word is when) the Asian Infrastructure Investment Bank turns out to be as good as everyone is predicating it to be,American influenced institutions could be on the decline and the fear of China's rising power could turn into a reality.

Sunday, November 15, 2015

Reflection on project 3





via Deviant Art by Calling-All-Angelz "Stitch Reading" 



In this post I reflect on Project 3 and I also  reviewed Lia's  and Allison's writing


1. Who reviewed ?
Professor Bottai  reviewed it but that's it . .................no peers as far as the eye can see.......................

update : Alex reviewed my blog about the AIIB

2. Feedback?

I was told to focus on the specifics of my arguments  and not go into much explanation about the general controversy because it's similar to a QRG.  Basically I was told to just dive right into my argument. Although it's written well Alex also agrees that it might be too similar to a QRG .


 Aspects of project 3 that need most work?

specifying the genre that I'm doing, and applying that format to my argument as well as focusing on a specific point of my argument to elaborate on instead of summarizing what the controversy is about in the beginning.


4. Overall Feelings?


I think once I get a clear idea of my genre or if I just directly jump into my argument befitting the economic blogging genre then i'll be fine.

Saturday, November 7, 2015

Draft of Public Argument

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In this post I introduce my draft

Because my genre is a blog you'll just be directed to another blog post . Sorry for being lazy.
I'm never sure about anything I write so ....any suggestion is a good suggestion unless it's rude.

Argument

Draft : How the U.S looks like a hater compared to the AIIB

via Flickr by  doobybrain https://www.flickr.com/photos/doobybrain/360276843/sizes/l/in/photostream/

The US has created another awkward situation. Recently the  American government stubbornly opposed the creation of China's Asian Infrastructure  Investment bank. They even went as far as trying to covertly sway other countries from joining the AIIB ,  much like how mean girls would  try to get everyone in school to shun a girl they didn't like. However America's opposition  was dutifully ignored  as everyone, except for loyal Japan, joined the AIIB. America is now  stuck, looking petty and  trying trying to maintain the facade that they support the AIIB  while not admitting that they just may have made a sad  mistake.

Recently the US government declared a  backhanded truce with China, hoping to put the semi embarrassing ordeal behind them. The "truce" also made sure that China would continue to place  funds into the World bank and other American influenced institutions. Although China says they welcome any participation America will offer they probably don't need (or care for )America's help which is reiterated in MarketPulse .

A few months back, America stated that the opposition of the AIIB came from concerns about environmental, and social safeguards however most economists and news sources stated it came from the U.S feeling that their influence in the global economy would be  threatened by the AIIB , and it will.

Be that as it may ,Economists across the globe and even in America,  proclaim that the AIIB will  be an overall benefit to the world and  perhaps run better than the world bank.  Meaning, that more loans will be offered to countries with ' fewer strings attached' , unlike the American influenced World Bank.  For example , Usually a country needs a loan to fix an energy shortage, or water shortage, some sort of building projects like for roads and hospitals . Other institutions ( *cough* The World Bank) would require the cost of materials used like bricks or asphalt  or water treatment  to be raised substantially in order to equal the amount loaned out. The AIIB however would not do that and instead rely on other finance options . (CNBC)

The AIIB hasn't even funded it's first project yet and it's already turning out to be a better option than the old institutions . The main goals of the AIIB are to help out undeveloped Asian countries however a benefit for one is essentially a benefit for all  in dealing with global economics even though the U.S didn't see it that way in the beginning.

via Deviant Art
 by XXspiritwolf2000XX
"Haters gonna hate"
http://xxspiritwolf2000xx.deviantart.com/art/Haters-gonna hate-372411504
Rather than being what some would call " a hater" The U.S should have kept their feelings to themselves and offered to be the first one to join the AIIB . and why?  The benefits would have been tremendous . For instance the U.K was one of the first European countries to join the AIIB and the result? A reported 60 billion dollar deal from China covering The U.K's industries of retail, finance, energy  and aerospace will signed. Also China will be financially backing the U.K's first nuclear factory in twenty five years.  Now of course , just because someone joined doesn't mean their privy to this kind of monetary benefit , but China has been investing an awful lot money in developed nations particularly the U.S.  Business Spectator states that  reports have shown that  over the last five years  an estimate of 46 billion have been spent on projects in the U.S  So who's to say that a billion dollar deal wouldn't have come America's way if they had joined?

Naturally, it's logical to think that the U.S could have happily  indulged in that kind of support but instead they were a bit rude in openly shutting down the development of the AIIB. If they had joined first and then covertly investigated later America wouldn't be stuck looking like a hater and there might possibly have been some agreement or contract that would have helped out the economy as well.Presently,despite the niceties, China could essentially care less about the U.S's assistance in these grand global plans that include creating substantial trade throughout Eurasia and Africa that could result in the development of poor countries.

In essence America fears China's rising power in the economic sector, however if the government  really wanted to stop it , maybe they should have allied themselves with the AIIB. If (or when) the Asian Infrastructure Investment Bank turns out to be as good as everyone is predicating it to be ,  American influenced institutions could be on the decline and that fear could turn into a reality.







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Considering Visual Elements

via Flickr by StrangeTikiGod "Why so serious George?" https://www.flickr.com/photos/strangetikigod/2754971660

In this post I consider visual elements and as a side note I think I shall use this image again for my writing because I love it and it fits the theme of my public argument .


Creating Visual Salience



  • Is image theme relevant to argument theme?  I'm planning on using comical images to display my point of view. Whatever theme the image has should co-exist well with my argument and keep the feel lighthearted.
  • Is image tone relevant to tone of article? Because I'm using funny probably cartoonish images in my argument the tone should match the casualness that i'm trying to create within my writing. Overall becasue the images are light they well fit well with the tone of my writing. 
  • Does image inform or emphasize argument? The images I plan on using will emphasize my argument. Essentially i'll use casual words as if I'm talking to a friend like "petty" or  childish" and the images will emphasize the tone of those words as well as my argument.
  • Is the image in close proximity to text? I'm not sure about the placement yet. I guess wherever I feel I need to place an image is where i'll place it and if it's above or below the text is where it will be. 
  • If the image is a graph or chart does it support argument? I haven't thought about using a graph yet. However if  I use a graph, though i'm not sure in what aspect i'll use it , then it will definitely be relevant to my argument and support it. 
  • Is the image in close proximity with the argument?  physically or visually? because it will be both . The images will relate to the argument and be closed to the argument as well. by relate though I mean it will make sense why I chose that image rather than just putting random images of .....I don't know..... , unicorns on there. 





Project 3 Outline

via Flickr  by gfpeck "Extra. Extra"  https://www.flickr.com/photos/wespeck/4845710880
In this post I create an outline of my argument

Introduction.......

For an introduction to my argument , Think about your Situation is the best choice.  Essentially i'm just refuting a situation and trying to persuade my audience to look at it from what I assume is the better viewpoint (my own)  and how I think it should be handled instead . Rather than going into tedious details I can use other credible sources for my evidence and build upon my argument so my audience is persuaded to see from my point of view . 

Body.........

1. Points of argument: why the US handled the AIIB in a childish way
  • It made the government look bad  when other countries didn't back the U.S 's  reasons against China
  • The U.S has been trying to gain a foothold into the Asian Market so joining the AIIB would have been a good thing, so it draws up questions as to why they opposed it so much
  • Most likely if the U.S joined there would have been tangible benefits from China to our own struggling economy
  • The way the U.S is handing it now is slightly petty and embarrassing because although they "support" China now, they are not trying to rectify the situation by helping out the AIIB's endeavors but instead they are  making sure China is still putting money into the heavily American influenced World bank.
2. Criticisms of my Argument
  • Americas reasons of environmental and social issues regarding the AIIB's development as well as issues regarding the transparency of the flow of funds from china to other countries is  a logical concern and America should keep out of the business of other countries endeavors while making sure they're interests are squared away .
3. Key Support and Rebuttal

Support: The U.S is handling the situation in a strange way although the world bank is extending their hand the American government itself is not.  The chance to join the AIIB would have been great for the American market but it seems America has missed it's chance due to the fact that it seemed more likely that they were threatened  of the AIIB's formation rather than concerned. 

Rebuttal: America's concerns are logical and the way America is handling the situation is good for economics as well as good politics , and as long as American interests are secure there shouldn't be reason for America to dive right into another responsibility.  However none of that is true becasue it's makes global relations awkward , makes America seem petty and it throws away a good opportunity for the U.S if they had joined and openly supported the AIIB.

4. Topic Sentence

After opposing the formation of China's AIIB and covertly trying to get other countries to turn away from it as well, The U.S has now dropped it's opposition and  now  awkwardly"supports" the endeavors of the bank , not only has our government missed out on a prime opportunity ,  but China and everyone who has joined does not want or need ( and perhaps never needed ) the governments  thinly veiled support anyway. 


6.

MAP

Conclusion........ 

The best conclusion for my argument would be Future of the Debate.  Or rather the future of the issue and where I think it will lead to and what will come from the U.S 's actions. I chose this  because the goal for my audience is to get them to think about my estimated  result of the actions taken by the government and see if they can create a better conclusion or predication about will happen in the future. 



Reflection: From reading Jovanka and Lia's posts on their project outlines I noticed that my argument doesn't really affect anyone personally like the environment would so mapping out the benefits to people for my argument wouldn't necessarily work , but rather listing the benefits fro the country and economy as a whole would. and when i realized that I knew I was on the right track for my argument.


Friday, November 6, 2015

Analyzing my Genre

via Flickr by Fernando Hernandez " Suspicious Fry" https://www.flickr.com/photos/f26/5042198485/

In this post I analyze the genre I chose, which are economic blogs

Examples:

1.
2.
3.
4.
5.



Social Context : 

  • Where? The genre is typically set in economic news sites , such as online magazines or online newspapers or on independent sites for blogs.
  • What? the subject of the genre that I chose and that is displayed within the five examples are related to China's economy and the development of the AIIB, and it's effects on the current global economic balance.  
  • Who? People related to the field of  economics or business or wanting to learn and be given up to  date  information on current economic news read this genre. 
  • When? Why? What purpose ?  The genre is used at all times and offers brief but in depth information that a person can read (usually) without being too overwhelmed by the content.

Rhetorical Pattern of the Genre:

  • Type of Content?  It usually contains a  factual report , and an opinion on the current economic trends and news , and an opinionated predication of how a certain economic action will turn out in the future and it's impacts
  • Rhetorical appeals used often? The rhetorical appeal used often in economic blogs are logos and ethos .  logos because they display evidence and figures from factual  sources and experienced knowledge of the topic, and ethos because usually the person writing the blog is a credible figure in the economic sphere such as the writer being David Dollar in  example three    
  • How are the texts organized? The texts usually start with a general statement or opinion about the topic and then breaks it self down into sections to explain it's viewpoints and offer evidence and then ends in a resulted prediction or conclusion of the impacts of the topic. such as is displayed in example five.
  • Do sentences have a certain style? There isn't really a standard sentence style for economic blogs.  The sentences are pretty straightforward and the paragraphs are full of hyperlinks for added resources. which is displayed in example one 
  • Word choice? The words used are pretty heavy with difficult economic jargon  the overall effect gives the blog a professional and trusted tone such as  example three again.

Social Context of Genre:


  • Who does the genre include/exclude? The genre of the text includes  people who  have an interest and maybe even be involved with economic becasue of the terms used. The genre may exclude people who aren't as involved in the field as is seen  again in example one. 
  • What roles for writers and readers does the genre encouraged? The genre encourages the reader to have a bit of prior knowledge of the topic and basic economics so they don't get confused while reading and the it encourages the writer to take on a professional and almost professor like tone in relaying the information and facts.
  • What beliefs/values are assumed from users of genre? the beliefs and values assumed from the users of the genre, is that they value the opinion of trusted economic researchers and people related to the industry , so much so that they will consider their opinions and predictions about certain topics.
  • What content is most valuable / least valuable? In economic blogs the facts and the ending prediction or estimated result of the writer's suggestion is the the most valuable part of the content. the least valuable would be .....well it's all pretty valuable since the facts include everything that's in the blog.


Reflection: 

 From reading Lia and Allison's posts I learned that  both of them are doing text centered genres as well . and although Lia's is more informal Allison's , similar to mine doesn't have many visuals or eye catching variables to draw in readers. It made wonder if I should change my genre to something else , but then I thought " well i'm too far now."  so I'll just change some of the mechanics of the genre i'm writing . unlike the examples posted, save for the Washington Post one, mine will be shorter , extremely casual with visuals , only because it's directed towards a different audience and they , similar to me, would get bored.











Friday, October 30, 2015

Considering Types

via Deviant Art by Zweilhaender-Blitz " Slenderman! I choose you" http://zweihaender-blitz.deviantart.com/art/Slenderman-I-choose-you-408115383
In this post I consider the types of arguments that would best fit my own writing

Best Choices


  • Proposal - A proposal argument is one of the better choices for my writing becasue my argument is centered mainly around why America shouldn't have opposed the bank and joined it instead, and I would be offering logical explanations  of why I think the way I do  and why it would benefit the American economy . so in effect I would proposing that if America had did this ....this would happen. 

  • Refutation- A refutation is a another good choice since I'm disagreeing with America's way of dealing with the AIIB and I can provide reasons as to why they were wrong and the negative effects that will have for not only economical relations but political ones as well.


Not The Best Choices

  • Position- A position argument wouldn't be the best choice becasue my position is already known and it's not that different from other positions so it would be just like other basic arguments. It also wouldn't offer like ways it could be better or the impacts of the issue. 
  • Evaluation- an evaluation argument only focuses on the success of a certain solution to an issue and I don't necessarily agree with how America is handling the current issue and feel they could do something else that would be more effective. 
  • Casual- A casual argument is fine but it's not a strong as refutation or proposal and wouldn't get all of my specific points that i feel are important across to the audience. It would only be a general summary of my opinion. 

Reflection: 

From reading Hunter and Lia's rhetorical action plan  and their considering  types  post, (Lia , Hunter)  My plans almost shifted a bit when in Lia's post of her considering types pointed out that it's probably;y not a good idea to do a proposal argument when you're not really all that knowledgeable about the topic, however I still think it's okay and will probably;y end up doing it , unless I find that I really can't.

My Rhetorical Action Plan


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In this post I plot out my plan for my argument

Audience :

In my argument I'm trying to persuade young college students , preferably new to the economic major to understand my perspective and opinion about the AIIB Controversy.

  • Knowledge- The audience may  know the bare minimum about this controversy , which is that america had a problem with AIIB and China. but they won't know what exactly for or what the AIIB is used for . They may have opinions that strictly side with America that might need addressing so as to broaden their view as economists . 
  • Values -Other than having strong American values and thinking of the issue from a global political standpoint the audience shouldn't  hold many principles about the situation since they don't know much about it.
  • Standards of Argument- The research that will persuade my audience are scholarly sources from economists that are knowledgeable about the economic relations between America, China and the rest of the world. I would translate this research into a very basic and simplified version that anyone could understand including my audience. 
  • Visual Elements- My audience might respond to comedic visual elements that relate to the subject but still creates a lighthearted setting so that the reader won't feel overburdened with knowledge .
  • Purpose- My audience is reading my argument to expand their understanding of the global economic field, and perhaps further their comprehension to the point where they can make their own predictions about the economic future concerning America. My argument could possibly be sucessful in motivating my audience to at least ponder the future of the American Economy.


Genre:

I'm considering a basic , but extremely casual blog post that honestly showcases my point of view.
for example these posts explain economics but in semi formal ways with a lot of confusing jargon. 1.
and 2. 

  • Function- the function of using a blog post is because it's  designed to be more like a conversation between two people rather than just giving someone a page of information to look through. I think it'll be easy to read through for the audience. 
  • Setting- I could see it being used online in a class discussion or even as a quick reference for a student's  research 
  • Appeals-I would use logos and ethos in my appeal by using factual evidence and proof from researchers with credibility and standing within the economic field. 
  • Visual Elements-I would use comedic images to keep the overall feel of the argument lighthearted and casual so it is easily digestible for the reader 
  • Style-I would be extremely casual and not use mind-numbing jargon that would tire the readers out

Another genre I would consider using would be an article in a campus newspaper or magazine.  some brief example would be something similar to this  or this one  which are virtually the same.

  • Function- the function of using a campus magazine or newspaper is because it is directly pinpointed towards college students and will make the reader feel as if it  is exclusive information for them
  • Setting-I could see it being used as a casual guide for expanding their knowledge on the subject 
  • Appeals- I would again use logos and ethos to appeal to my audience by utilizing research and opinions from credible sources 
  • Visual Elements-I would still use comedic images to keep the feel of the argument lighthearted
  • Style-I would still be casual as to not overwhelm my audience with information


Positive Actions

  1. My audience wholeheartedly agrees with my argument and adds even more information and reason as to why I'm right
  2. My audience understand the argument , agrees with it but can now do their own research to further predict what will happen in the coming future
  3. Whether they agree or not it motivates and inspires my reader to pursue research in the economic field to find their own answer to problems dealing with the global economy


Negative Rebuttals

  1. They agree with America's side and provide evidence of the " social and environmental" safeguards the U.S government listed as caution against China. In return I'll provide the benefits of the AIIB and the overall positive effect it'll have on the global economy
  2. They could disagree with the benefits of the AIIB and provide evidence that it wouldn't work out the way economists are hoping and I would then have to dig up evidence of China's history of becoming an economic powerhouse in a few short years and proving that the likelihood of failure with so many countries backing it is possible but won't be allowed to happen.
  3. They could also disagree about America making a mistake in not joining the AIIB and list reasons why it was a good thing they didn't join, and i would have to display America's footholds in the Asian market in general and explain why joining the AIIB would have helped.


















Thursday, October 29, 2015

Analyzing purpose

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In this post I analyze my purpose for writing my argument



The goal of  my public argument is to state that America missed out on a good economic opportunity to join China's bank seemingly because of the government's pride and unwillingness to relinquish the illusion of control.  As a result of my argument I would like for the audience to agree and realize the almost childishness of America's decision.

Plausible Reactions


  • The audience agrees and moves on with their lives
  • The audience disagrees and moves on with their lives as well
  • From the audience who disagrees they provide accurate information that refutes my argument
  • Readers will be able to draw several beneficial conclusions and even  intresting economical predictions  from my analysis about the economic future of The U.S and the world overall


Not Plausible Reactions



  • The audience disagrees so completely that they riot
  • The audience agrees so completely that they riot
  • The conclusions the readers draw from argument are a bunch of crazy conspiracies so bizarre that it creates a mass hysteria about the future of the world as we know it (still a bit plausible though)

Likely Consequences


A likely effect from the readers drawing beneficial conclusions will be that my audience will not only understand completely my simplistic approach of this argument but will be able to predict the economical social, and even political  results of  America not joining the AIIB and how it will impact the market economy and the value of the U.S  dollar , hopefully, if they're that smart.


My Audience , specified 


The audience that would achieve my goal would most likely be college students in the economic field. Because they are new to the field and don't understand the impacts and intricate detailing that involves global economics once they read my argument they'll not only comprehend what i'm saying but be able to draw conclusions from it that benefits their research for their major as well as the economic field as a whole.














Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Analyzing Context

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In this post I answer questions about the context of the issue I chose.


  • What are the key perspectives on the debate you're studying?:  The key perspectives in my debate are between the American perspective of disapproving the AIIB and the perspective from China who created the AIIB for beneficial purposes despite the U.S's opposition. 

  • What are the major points of disagreements?: The U.S stated before that they had concerns about transparency and social and environmental safeguards within the AIIB, as stated by NPR . As well as the underlying point of disagreement would be that the U.S government felt threatened about a new international financial institution coming into play as stated by the Huffington Post . 

  • What are the possible points of agreement?: Overall most economists say the AIIB will be beneficial for the overall global economy and that not only will help with developing Asian countries but it will eventually help the global market . which is elaborated more in The N.Y Times article. 

  • What are the ideological differences between the perspectives?: The ideological differences between the perspectives is that the U.S is looking at it from a  traditional political standpoint, of not wanting their influence to be taken away while economists and China are seeing it more from an economical and financial view that will benefit the overall global structure  

  • What specific actions do their perspectives or texts ask their audience to take?:  From the economic perspective , the texts ask the audience to understand the benefits the AIIB will have on the overall economy such as in the NY article used above .from the U.S political position it asks the audience to understand the caution the government has with the AIIB by listing the reasons why America disapproves. 

  • What perspectives are useful in supporting your own arguments about the issue? why?: The perspectives from China and the economist who agreed with the AIIB's development are helpful in supporting my argument because it provides the benefits the AIIB will have on the overall good of the economy. and why I personally think America missed out on a great opportunity. 
  • What perspectives do you think will be the greatest threat to  your argument? why?: If there were more details and arguments about the reasons why America was cautious about the AIIB then it would prove a threat to my argument since it would be proof of why it wasn't a good idea.

Reflection: In  reading Joy and Bailey's posts they both had clear perspectives from both sides of their controversy and  I realized that my controversy lacks a bit from America's perspective. Even though I'm on the other side I'll need to do a bit more research into the reasons the government stated about  why they opposed it so I can frame my own argument better.


Saturday, October 24, 2015

Audience and Genre

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In this post I identify my intended audience, genre and a bunch of other things

My intended audience would be......


  • young business people working in economic fields in America interested in East Asian economic news and ventures who  would want to be informed in a professional way about what's going on in the economic sphere and how it relates to their businesses.
  • college students just starting  in the Economic major ,interested in East Asia who aren't as knowledgeable about economic news and the money relations between China and the U.S and who would want to be informed but not bored or overwhelmed by a lot of terms
Locations and Genres 

  • for young business people a casual  economic magazine article, or a classy economic journal of opinions , facts and news
  • for college students a quick interesting blog or an intresting and informative YouTube video

Examples










Extended Annotated Bibliography

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In this post I present my annotated bib of new sources


THIS

Friday, October 23, 2015

Narrowing my Focus

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In this post I narrow down my 15 questions to a few


  • What will the American  government contribute to the AIIB to benefit themselves?
The U.S government after , disapproving the AIIB decided that it will work with the AIIB through the World Bank and International Monetary fund , and I think it's important to know  how they will help and if China will even need America's help?

  • What are the benefits other countries will receive from  joining the AIIB?
A lot of the media covered America's opposition against the bank but there wasn't  really any word from what the other countries who joined the AIIB thought and how it would help them by becoming one of the founding members
  • What are the new developments the AIIB will start or have already started working on? 
China stated that the bank will basically serve as a crutch for countries that need economic improvement on their infrastructure so it's common to want to know who the first candidate will be. 

Questions about Controversy

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In this post I ask questions about my chosen controversy which is the Asian Infrastructure Investment Bank and why it is initially a really good thing for the global economy as a whole .

Who

  •  Who is going to receive the funds from the AIIB?
  • Why was Japan initially against it?
  •  Which of the founding countries of the AIIB are going to benefit from it the most other than the East Asian countries?

What

  • What will the American government be contributing to the AIIB
  • Will Japan contribute anything?
  • What are the first plans the money will be used for?

When

  • When (If they have)  did the AIIB fund the first plan
  • When (if they have) did Japan contribute
  • When (again if) did whoever receive the funds improve 

Where

  • Where in China will the AIIB help improve?
  • In General where in East Asia will the AIIB improve on?
  • Where in the rest of the world will this have an immediate impact on the economy?


How

  • How did the general public react to it's development on social media?
  • How did the scholarly sources defend  America's initial disapproval?
  • How did the general news publicize it's development , in a positive way , negative way, appalled, shocked, horrified , admiring way? 







Reflection on Project 2

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In this post  I answer  questions about my revision process



  • What was specifically revised?

In my essay the introduction and conclusion were revised as well as the content of my body paragraphs so the the essay as a whole would flow better as well as easier to comprehend for the audience reading it. 

  • How did you reconsider your thesis or organization?

I reconsider my organization by adding more transition words between paragraphs , hoping that it would make the essay flow better between the analysis and the instructions for the audience. 

  • What led to those changes?

The peer review and my own thoughts about the flow of essay led to those changes as well as wondering if my audience would ultimately understand where I was coming from.

  • How do those changes affect my credibility as an author?

I guess because I couldn't catch those mistakes the first time it makes me seem less credible however now that I changed them it ups my credibility becasue I attempted to make the words flow better and make the content relate to my audience .

  • How will these changes better address the audience or venue?

The changes address the audience better by explicitly including them within the analysis of the public argument and explaining each step and why.

  • How did you reconsider sentence structure and style?

I reconsidered sentence structure by attempting to add more transition words  and  I reconsidered style by  attempting to be more casual in the beginning and end to connect with my  audience and a little bit more formal when instructing them on constructing an analysis.

  • How will these changes assist your audience in understanding your purpose?

I think they'll assist my audience in understanding my purpose because rather  than being formal throughout and  possibly boring them , I try to catch their attention and relate to them through a more casual tone.

  • Did you have to reconsider  the  conventions of the particular genre in which you are writing?

No, actually I knew how I wanted to write the essay as soon as I understood the genre. As soon as I understood the genre I didn't have to reconsider the conventions I just had to figure out a way to  get the audience to understand.

  • How does  the process of reflection help you reconsider your identity as a writer?

It makes me think that I could pay attention more to what i'm writing , and by that it means consider my audience a bit more ,since usually I write without thinking of  the person who is going to read it or who it is written for. I usually just think that becasue it's my grade it's written for myself. 

Reflection:  From reading Chris and Bailey's post  I learned that almost everyone had trouble with addressing the audience because of the option of explicitly talking to them in the essay was a strange concept for everyone. It was relieving to know that it wasn't just me , and that in other areas , like being clearer or elaborating more wasn't just an individual problem either. Overall , looking back at my own writing,  I think I did fairly good job.


Thursday, October 22, 2015

Project 2

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I'm done with project 2 .


.............................................and here it is

Project 2

Monday, October 19, 2015

Punctuation part 2

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In this post , I once again go over the things I didn't know about punctuation.


The Apostrophe 

Although I think I have a pretty good handle on apostrophes, sometimes, when I write really fast and don't read over it ,  I mix up  's and s' . Rules for Writer explains when to use which  . For example  's shows possession  such as Mary's hat .While  s'  shows joint possession  like ; The employees' paycheck. I guess I never really paid attention becasue my main focus will always just be content rather than technicalities, but it won't hurt to go over my essay and check for correct apostrophe use. 

Quotations

I was pretty sure I had a  lock on quotations , I knew when to use them and how .  however there were certain cases that I didn't know about.  Such as using quotation marks to emphasize words used as words  and  not using quotation mark for a long quote .

Other Punctuation Marks 

In this section of Rules for writers it goes over what other punctuation can be used . I try not to stray from what I know so it was intresting learning what other marks I cold use in my essay. For example  using dashes to emphasize something rather than comas.  such as  the example used in Rules for Writers , Everything that went wrong -from the peeping tom at her window last night  to my head on collision today-we blamed on our move.

In regards to apostrophes I seemed to use them correctly even though I wasn't  fully aware of when and how. for example 
The tone  in Fifield's writing elicits somber emotions by drawing up powerful images the audience can accurately visualize

With quotations I used quotes to emphasize the title of the article I used in my essay but it seemed unnecessary since some readers could consider it a quote so I thought Italicizing would be better.

“ In North Korea’s growing economy-and America’s misconceptions about it”the author  addresses the ineffectiveness of the sanctions placed on the  communist country’s economy.

Saturday, October 17, 2015

Paragraph Analysis 2

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In this post I wearily  analyze my strengths and weakness of my essay (Even though I'd rather be at McDonalds ordering chicken mcnugggests or some other form of McHappiness )


In my paragraph analysis  I noticed that I explained myself pretty well in my paragraphs including why I chose a certain example and what it offers to the strategies used. I could be more explicit about the affects of these certain examples to the audience and why they would persuade someone. I also noticed that whenever I mixed the analysis of my text with addressing my audience it didn't flow well together so I'll have to fix that too.  My strengths would be using a lot of words to mask what I lack , and also providing useful explanations, My weakness would be  transitioning and not  going into minute detail.


Revised Conclusion

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In this post I revise the end of my essay

I feel like this conclusion answers the question of so what better  than the first . It also goes into detail of the of what the author's strategies will ultimately do for the intended audience. I also feel like it relate  back to the target rhetorical audience as well, because  they will ultimately understand that I know their struggles and where they are coming from.


New


The author of this text informs and gently persuades her readers to agree with her viewpoint of America's delusions about the strength of the sanctions placed on the North Korean country by  drawing on the audience's emotions .  Through these strategies Fifield opens the eyes of her American readers , and confirms  to her audience that the government may not always know what they're doing or acknowledge the  consequences  of their actions. I don't want to say this is a perfect conclusion but this should meet the requirements.  It doesn't have to  be covered in unicorn glitter and angel sparkles to  catch the eyes of a superficial reader (although it can) , It just has to ,simply,  make sense and give the  reader the perception that you as a writer know what you're talking about even if you honestly don't.

Old 

Through investigative journalism Fifield disproves the American belief of their hold on the North Korean economy and effectively sways the audience to agree with her stance mainly through the use of strong emotional appeals. As a rhetorical analysis for a public argument this much should suffice, as a writer and a college student being able to observe and argue the points of your own analysis , requires not only labeling the strategies used but also being able to provide answers for the patronizing questions of why and how for your readers.